The World According to Hayden: Hayden's Fable with Adjectives

The World According to Hayden

Thursday, January 17, 2008

Hayden's Fable with Adjectives

Hayden used his fable to add descriptive words.

Once upon a time my NICE dad got me a YUMMY drink at the GREY AND RED AND WHITE gas station. It was a BLACK coke. We went to the beach THAT WAS FULL OF SEA MONSTERS. I said, "I can help you, Dad." My NICE dad said, "You can not help me." But I was right. I helped him. He said, "Can you give me that YELLOW, BASKETBALL pencil down there?" And I did. I helped him. And he said, "You're right." We went to the beach FULL OF CRABS. We found some BIG fish and we eated them. I loved it. And then we went on a boat WITH A WINDOW. IT WAS A HUGE BOAT WITH SAILS ON IT. Then, we dived and saw some GREY sharks WITH BIG TEETH AND THEY ALMOST GOT US. Then we went back on the GINORMOUS boat. After that we went back to the beach and then back home. The End.

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

What WONDERFUL adjectives, Hayden! You have a COOL brain and you think of EXCITING stories.

Love you - Grandma

9:33 AM  
Blogger Kramer said...

You are such a cool kiddo! Ginormous happens to be one of my favorite adjectives too and you used it very nicely in your fable.

The black coke makes me want one right now!

Love you precious boy!
Aunt Lyns
p.s. I know Uncle Jason's picture is on here, but it is really me!

8:05 PM  
Blogger alisha said...

those were AWESOME adjectives! You did a WONDERFUL, GREAT job :o)

9:50 AM  

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